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Re: In the Dragonfly's Void ~ Chapter One
I agree with Kyte about water sounding like it means sex. The story didn't make a whole lot of sense. I would enjoy it farther if you wrote more and ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Alone
It's alright, nothing special but there's not anything wrong with it that i could find (except that last paragraph is a little weird)
Nov 13, 2008